Let me out!

Take a hammer and smash this thing
Throw a wrench in the bloody fire
Take a nail and pierce my left eye
Sear my heart with red-hot iron
Write your name in my blood if you must
But bring your bargaining chips to the wake

Fate and destiny turn to slush
Through the grate of reality
I will drag volition homewards
Kicking and screaming in fear
I’m more than more than what you’ve made of me
Or you wouldn’t have bothered

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    1. jamborobyn says:

      I reckon that if you had met me in person, you would have said that much sooner! Annette, I wonder whether this is a common feeling for people when their conditions of their life are oppressive. Personally, there is so much energy/clarity available when I am with this feeling, but on some level I don’t think it’s “appropriate”, so it’s rarely expressed.

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      1. Writing is a great outlet for these intense feelings…

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      2. jamborobyn says:

        I’ll take that as a no

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  1. Jeff Nguyen says:

    Your verse is searing in it’s honesty and vividness. Really well done, Robyn!

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    1. jamborobyn says:

      Thank you so much, Jeff. You have to know how much I admire the forthrightness and sincerity of your posts. From that perspective, this is quite the compliment.

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  2. More than an outlet, yours is the literature of a real revolution

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    1. jamborobyn says:

      Oh my Claire, I absolutely expect a revolution at some point considering the majority of people in this current world are oppressed or living in fear.

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  3. I am ready, companera. ! Viva Revolucion!

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